Thursday, 10 December 2015

Formative blog feedback - Miss Hunter


Gwion, your blog is looking very good. Well done.



So far:



WWW: Your ideas are thorough, detailed and thoughtful. You understand the conventions of a magazine and I can see that you have used them in the preliminary task. Your recent case study analysis of 'Empire' is mainly very well-developed.



EBI: Your contents page analysis of 'Empire' is significantly less detailed than your other posts. Develop this, considering how each aspect appeals to the target audience of the magazine.



Next steps:

  • Continue with your case study of a magazine of your choice.
  • Create a presentation explaining what the target audience will be for your own music magazine.

Keep up the good effort.

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